Changing Lanes
By DeviantxSeraph
We all drive our different cars
Heading in seprate directions
Our purposes abstract
Abdicate we must?
Shall we stop out cars
To endear our lust?
As I scabble across the page
Different cars are flying by
I peer with a vigilance eye
at those of virtue
Volleys spread across the sky
The wind sends messages in whisper
Thou vehemence never seems to veer
Slope and turn cause woe
Dire utterance leaks from my pains
I anticipate the symmetry
The I know is not yet bereavement
I shall stand up on my own
Abandon my restrain
Inanimate the world is
Withered vast virile
That seem to make it all,
worth while
Accursed our life is
Sending us through tunnels and alleys
Fanticism of our freedom
Erratic paths leading to strange places
Abstaining new crashes
Crashes to take those next in line before me,
an evolution
Most of us evade
Harm and hurt is evergreen
Engravements can be remembered dreary
Absolve our difference
We shall combine
Feed on those still driving,
we dine.
Comments on "Changing Lanes"
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
this was absolutely wonderfully done...I brain teaser...perfect.
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Where is all the praise? This is something far above the usual. I can imagine you sitting in the backseat, watching scenery fly by, and scribbling downt these words. I love this.
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A former member wrote:
I like ur skills.. there deadly.. this poem i really like for some reason i don't know of.. but good job
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
articulate and profound.............well done..........urban