Dissilience

By DeviantxSeraph

So many years
the sun,the rain,and snow,
their counting

the oceans,
their drying

the people,
their laughing
their loving
their drumbing the heart strings

the leaves,
their falling

creation,
we feed to death
but take from it,
everything

our world,
over heating

our earth,
deconstructing

our people,
discussing

the super hero,
not saving

one person,
she's writing

another,
he's fighting

when it's all said and done,
"what would of made it worth the fight?"
will we cry from our peers in heaven?

regret,
with the bite of knowledge,
Adam destroyed our world

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© 2007 DeviantxSeraph
Published on Friday, August 17, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Imsosickxxx On Monday, August 20, 2007, Imsosickxxx (80)By person wrote:

    Wow, incredible, and the ending...that last stanza could not have been better written, well done.

  • Mylissa On Monday, August 20, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    perfectly done.

  • NikesRain On Friday, August 17, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    hard truths to ingest and reflect on surely.... well done

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    i have to take notes, this is big... so many different side streets / ave's that the mind can wander... i am speechless, this is one of the best writes i have seen in a while... magnanimous.... an example of how divine art can be.

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    this is fav'd, because this spoke true truth.

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