Dissilience
By DeviantxSeraph
So many years
the sun,the rain,and snow,
their counting
the oceans,
their drying
the people,
their laughing
their loving
their drumbing the heart strings
the leaves,
their falling
creation,
we feed to death
but take from it,
everything
our world,
over heating
our earth,
deconstructing
our people,
discussing
the super hero,
not saving
one person,
she's writing
another,
he's fighting
when it's all said and done,
"what would of made it worth the fight?"
will we cry from our peers in heaven?
regret,
with the bite of knowledge,
Adam destroyed our world
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© 2007 DeviantxSeraph
Published on Friday, August 17, 2007.
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, Imsosickxxx
(80) wrote:
Wow, incredible, and the ending...that last stanza could not have been better written, well done.
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
perfectly done.
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On Friday, August 17, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
hard truths to ingest and reflect on surely.... well done
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On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
i have to take notes, this is big... so many different side streets / ave's that the mind can wander... i am speechless, this is one of the best writes i have seen in a while... magnanimous.... an example of how divine art can be.
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On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
this is fav'd, because this spoke true truth.