Comments by All Members
- "violent upheavels...I wish like Josh (Mathesix) you posted more consistently, anything I've read from you has such vitality and strength...this is visceral and enchanting and powerful...heckers!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Death of a Thousand Cuts" by monalisamarie
- "The last lines were beautiful. Nicely done, very unique style and subject, I enjoyed this immensely. :-D Wonderfully done."
Posted by K_Love on "The Blade" by monalisamarie
- "i usually hate rhyming, but something about this peice got to me....i especially love the last line."
Posted by verablue on "The Blade" by monalisamarie
- "perhaps line 4 of the second stanza compresses the flow...for-bid-den being a bit chunky (trochee?) for the rythmic flow?? Alas...it's refreshing to see a metrical piece with poetic feel..juicy write"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Forbidden" by monalisamarie
- "Omg I think my heart just got swallowed by this poem forever's! O no this was just sad and lovely and it just pulled at you in all directions*bookmarks* AWESOMENESS!"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "In Abrasive Silence" by monalisamarie
- "Bell jar hints at Sylvia Plath influences that kind of psychosomatic force meets burden of mind and this relationship echoes tormnent and uncertainty such as Plath's and Ted Hughes. Interesting and evocative."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "In Abrasive Silence" by monalisamarie
- "definately like your diction in this poem. nice use of words that make the poem complete. more so in the last three stanzas. thank you for the read."
Posted by maleficent on "Clay Heart" by monalisamarie
- "vomit words and ideas ive said that before- not word for word, more like "spewing meaningless words" or something like that i dont remember exactly but i think its cool that you said something like it too. oh and i liked the poem.really nice."
Posted by Mari on "Clay Heart" by monalisamarie
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