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Gunshot Wound to the Sky
By monalisamarie
Dance steps to blood splatter
Recreate murder
(Homecide is a ballet)
You see, a knife today
Is much more palatable than
This smile bandaged frown
Sky infected and pouring down
Acid blood, it turns gan-green
That you cannot see at night
And in the mourning
Exhales sickly fumes from her lungs
Earth is dying
From a gunshot wound to the sky
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© 2006 monalisamarie
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Mari
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wrote:
i liked picturing the sky infected. it was great.
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On Thursday, March 23, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
fabulously raw write .. I adore the final line ~V
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
Woah! I really like the imagery here. Yuo have proven a great addition to our littel group. ^V^
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, veingo
(526) wrote:
*You- that is.
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