Gunshot Wound to the Sky

By monalisamarie

Dance steps to blood splatter
Recreate murder
(Homecide is a ballet)

You see, a knife today
Is much more palatable than
This smile bandaged frown

Sky infected and pouring down
Acid blood, it turns gan-green
That you cannot see at night

And in the mourning
Exhales sickly fumes from her lungs
Earth is dying

From a gunshot wound to the sky

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© 2006 monalisamarie
Published on Wednesday, March 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    i liked picturing the sky infected. it was great.

  • mozarts cat On Thursday, March 23, 2006, mozarts cat (184)By person wrote:

    fabulously raw write .. I adore the final line ~V

  • veingo On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    Woah! I really like the imagery here. Yuo have proven a great addition to our littel group. ^V^

  • veingo On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, veingo (533)By person wrote:

    *You- that is.

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