Comments by All Members
- ""It’s not since before birth,
That you’ve truly been home." I find this line very profound, something to think about. If it were mine I'd have probably named this meditation, and thats exactly what it makes me want to do. "
Posted by BrokenButterflyWings on "Disconnect Yourself." by Ozymandias
- "Bad trips always remind me of Yoga. Yolk the tantra yolk it it goes forever in both ways. Just use the right or you'll end up in hell."
Posted by Unknown on "Disconnect Yourself." by Ozymandias
- "There wasn't really much imagery, but it worked quite well in this circumstance. I like the journy that was taken through this prose."
Posted by Trigger on "Disconnect Yourself." by Ozymandias
- "A good and very sad ending line there. But powerful. And I did dig the rhythm of this. Not bad, not bad at all. --Jes"
Posted by glasshouse on "Life is abusive" by Ozymandias
- "though mistakes only seem to slow it down, to be reborn is worth ir and you find those mistakes are part of the cause. It sounds weird, but if you learn from them, you'll be reborn. ~Silver~"
Posted by Unknown on "Reborn" by Ozymandias
- "moving and heart pulling.... stay strong and believe in each other... it's no easy thing to be apart... bright blessings to you both"
Posted by NikesRain on "Watching the stars." by Ozymandias
- "Hey babe,
This is a good work. I really like it. You pulled me into the poem with your fantastic words. Looking foreward to more!!!
Lisa"
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "Dark City" by Ozymandias
- "one thing that many long for.. search for throughout their lives... to be reborn, to find wholeness... good write..."
Posted by jack paper on "Reborn" by Ozymandias
- "Haha. Well thank you Your_only_love. I should fix that so it makes sense. I should have known that too."
Posted by Ozymandias on "Creator" by Ozymandias
- "It's pretty, though just to point out, stars are a bit too hot for life; earth is a planet, not a star"
Posted by Unknown on "Creator" by Ozymandias
- "I liked this although I shudder to think of how scary and fragile life would be in the hands of such a creator. To be annihilated at a moment's whim....wow."
Posted by soul dancer on "Creator" by Ozymandias
- "i really liked this. Writers blocks are never good. great write. ~ saddened."
Posted by Unknown on "Creator" by Ozymandias
- "hey babe....this was amazing as always. I loved the imagery and damn it was like a smack in the face....I just got lost with u in the crazy maze......love ya hun....and great write. ~*Leigh*~"
Posted by PassionateDarkDesire on "A Walk Through Chaos" by Ozymandias
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