Watching the stars.

By Ozymandias

Watching the stars
Slowly fade from the sky
I lie here alone,
Refusing to say good-bye.
Out of options in this hopeless struggle,
I breathe one long sigh.
The hardest thing I’ve had to do,
Is watch our love die.

And through the falling rain,
Come memories of the love we shared
Your beautiful smile still clear in my mind;
I wonder how long it will be,
Until we no longer care.

If I could just hold you in my arms
And kiss you once more,
I know my nights
Wouldn’t be so long,
And my heart
Wouldn’t be so sore.

Seek your happiness,
In everything you do.
And trust in my word,
That my love is true.
And after you leave,
I promise
To stay close with you.


Devoted to my girlfriend Mary,
who is worried that I will shut her out when she moves.

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© 2007 Ozymandias726
Published on Saturday, September 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ArtemisticSin On Monday, October 22, 2007, ArtemisticSin (17)By person wrote:

    The words fit so well, it creates an mysterious eloquence people can understand.

  • Narcissa On Sunday, September 16, 2007, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    This reached a faint sore spot that I stored away many years ago... Very touching.

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, September 15, 2007, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    You guys can make it, it's a tough situation to be in, but have faith!

  • PassionateDarkDesire On Saturday, September 15, 2007, PassionateDarkDesire (28)By person wrote:

    Hey hun...I'm in the exact same situation now.....trust me.....believe in eachother and things will be fine. BEst of luck -Sinful

  • NikesRain On Saturday, September 15, 2007, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    moving and heart pulling.... stay strong and believe in each other... it's no easy thing to be apart... bright blessings to you both

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