More than words

By Ozymandias

Words twist and tumble
Through my mind
But I can't grab the right word
Or the right line.
But every word I speak is true,
So trust me when I say my feelings for you.
What I once didn’t know,
Now overwhelms me night and day,
It seemed impossible to describe
But I think I’ve found a way. . .
To tell you how much you mean to me
And to let you know how I feel.
So I’m coming to see you now,
To tell you my love for you is real.



And I did just that. I drove to my girlfriends house to give it to her and tell her I love her.


This kind of writing is pretty uncommon for me, so I'd love to hear what you think.

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© 2007 Ozymandias726
Published on Wednesday, July 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • PassionateDarkDesire On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, PassionateDarkDesire (28)By person wrote:

    Hey hun- This is really good. Like you said...uncommon...but really good. No matter what you write...its ALWAYS good!!

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