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- "first poem, and post i have written was the huge on below. pls i hope that others on here do not seek out words, and works to write that will simply be so obvious that their intentions are selfish, not selfless. i understand all words those speak to me and utilize in our conversations, while also in online communication, as well as when reading works by others, and the opinions written by those who like, or dislike the piece they had just read. i pray that all people see, REALIZE that a writer is not a writer when just using words they seek to use making themselves to only the sad , and ignorant feel this "wow, this one is so smart, must be a great writer, and have experience as well"..no, read a simple simple poem, lets see, okay here is one....alone, poe..easy as pie like all of his works, or plath, same thing. dickens, scott, lovercraft, longfellow, etc. simple, and so inspiring, talented, and real. not desiring for anybody to find them so wonderful, no,,,,writers real ones dont. also i am positive all the lame little comments that appear as if people are actually giving the entire synopsis of what they just read...not possible. just like art at a museum...authors as well, seek to reveal things , but not for others to get exactly as if it what they can even grasp 100%. true writings, and true authors KNOW THAT WANTING TO INSPIRE, ATTRACT, AFFECT, AND MOVE all people who read their pieces. not for people to state whats the poem mean.like so many do with songs. thats so pointless. this writing here i KNOW means many things to all readers, unless one succumbs to the other comments, and plays the role of another sheep being led by what the "intelligent, well versed/well read, true as true love(hmmm think i believe in that, no), and wanting to learn about writing, and going the wrong way to do this. i dont reread posts from all places i leave em, and dont fear judgments on any errors in my grammar, sorry. i know who and what i am....krissy, the green thumb in a world of bright white fingers. met one i related 2, believing my matching thumb had arrived, but now,,,,,i think he just was wearing a temp dye so in time that green began coming off, only now to reveal his lack of all that we related to. hope not, but oh well if so..so WHO WROTE THIS, AGAIN I LOVE IT. IT MEANS SOMETHING TO ME THAT I AM POSITIVE THAT SOMETHING IS NOT ANYTHING YOU WROTE ABOUT. I RELATE WITH YOU THOUGH FOR THE WORDS, SENTENCE STRUCTURE, AND UR MISSION PARTLY I WOULD HOPE WAS TO AND DID EXPOSE MANY FEELINGS WITHIN MYSELF I NORMALLY ONLY CAN LET OUT WITH SELF HARMING, ANOREXIA, AND ALSO BY SUPPRESSING ALL I FEEL BECOME A RECLUSE FOR A BIT UNTIL THE FEELINGS VANISH UNTIL THEY RAISE UP WITHIN MY MIND ONCE AGAIN, ONLY WORSE THAN THE TIME BEFORE. i love me, and life though, and mean no insult to these commenting folks. just pls, its not impressive to read some of these comments. be you, and to the youngin newbies just learning bout, and whose passion is strongly leaning towards writing, and authors.....DO WHAT YOU WANT. DONT CARE WHAT OTHERS SAY IS LAME TO READ , OR LIKE..ALSO YOU ARE LOVING SOMETHING THAT POSSESSES NOT ONE RULE..U ARE FREE, 100% TO JUST BE YOURSELF, AND SAY F.O. to those saying differently. they are the ones who are without a backbone, or means of even knowing how to be real, genuine, and not wannabes. BE U AND U RULE TO ME, AND AS U GROW IN AGE< AND ALSO UR PASSIONS, YOU WILL REALIZE THIS ALL I PROMISE. GOOD LUCK TO THIS AUTHOR,a nd TO THE REAL ONES, OR FUTURE ONES. i mean this fully, and from my heart"
Posted by Unknown on "a soft denial" by FallenSky
- "im 37,and have been writing poetry, and short stories since 14. also of course have written in a countless number of journals since 14 as well. still have several that in time will fill the clean, and unsoiled lines with my thoughts, ideas, and really anything my brain is churning out at the moment i write in the journal. my brain is one that is considered really manic, and too many are diagnosed with m.d. that the disease is now renamed, and all for p.c. reasons. for me, writing saves me from the noise, the words,ideas,analyzing in which i am a fiend about doing, plans, and self talk. also keeps me from hurting myself in ways nobody understand. i guess 14 was when i was exposed to be the real me, krissy. i am not a poor sport, simply informed, and i know, smart. i read this piece, and was completely inside of it. you(the author) possess many feelings, and are so very talented, and open as to how u go about in sharing with others these emotions that u possess inside of you. as if it doesnt just affect ur mind, but entire being. like myself. maybe one day i will have the will to post something, but really am my worst critic. its not that i fear others "that is so lame", or "u suck", haha. not at all. iv gotten this since about 14 for less, my choice of dress. still do even, for although i have changed by my hand, rather evolved, but never will be what so many try to berate me into turning into....this horrific boring mess. i just dont wanna, never did wanna fit into any subculture, never, but admit back years ago sure,hawks, liberty spikes, combat boots,and blag flag shirts owned my closet. now its just same stuff, but not often, no hawks, etc, but still me...lip service and classier though..an adult. unless you wish to count the twinkie the kid, and wizard of oz collection, or my hopefully SOON TWISTED LAND OF OZ 9 piece collectors set including the monkeys. anyways, i loved ur piece, and am going to copy it into a page in one of my favorite poems, and writings by....written on the cover. never will i swear to you whall i be so spineless, and such a fraud as to steal this calling it my own. i respect you, and whatever it is that gave u cause to develop this beautiful, yet painful piece, remember....there are people who are like that...many afraid to state that about themselves, but also a few , under a handful who TRULY know just by their gut that can relate too all you wrote in this piece..you are truly one that shouldnt be ignored, and i , if i may do so, wish to, want to, but wont til i am given permission by you personally, want to share this with a few individuals, a-to inform them as well, theyre really NOT on their own, and b-the others, assist further to hopefully fertilize the soil that houses the seed i feel confident was planted by my words already. these folks just are rather proud, and better than. these people, will realize, but i know if not shown examples besides mine, nothing will help. so let me know..ur new friend, krissy"
Posted by Unknown on "a soft denial" by FallenSky
- "this is so true! true beauty rarely ever cloaks itself within a shell of gold. thanks for this view of truth!!!"
Posted by Opklot on "Beauty ~Haiku~" by FallenSky
- "ironic how we intertwine the two...beauty of imperfections...flaws that shout truth and glory. .. .there IS such beauty in a breaking; makes me think of sculptors and stonemasons....and the graceful fall of his is exquisite; your words continue to impress and emboss.....soft.subtle.splendourous.splendid.."
Posted by Unknown on "A Tale of Beauty and Decay" by FallenSky
- "the real raw truth of this; and the contrast.....the quasi.modo, half.formed effect. . .. an uncovering of the unsure side of us all.....and yet...im inclined to say that those eyes that see/capture\recognize beauty cannot be ugly in any way. .. . they only see what they themselves reflect....but this does unveil the truth of how detrimental we are to our own visions...our own selves....within/without."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty ~Haiku~" by FallenSky
- "you write with such a quiet elegance....it is breathtaking...and even in pain you create such serene beauty....."
Posted by Lavenia on "Love Scenario" by FallenSky
- "Sometimes poems are more like music and this one sang to the beat of my heart...enjoyed this a lot...I need to check out some of your other works."
Posted by Narcissa on "Among Bramble and Thorn" by FallenSky
- "fruit of the bramble right here... in death there is life, as life in death, and this revealed in christ like imagery how poetry thrives with pain... and pain with poetry... well structured, nice emphasis through repetition."
Posted by Unknown on "Among Bramble and Thorn" by FallenSky
- "mon dieu. .. . why....have i not read your words befoe todae?? the absolute languid liquidness of syllables and structure....such slipping ease.....and beautifully lilted...."
Posted by Unknown on "a minstrel’s hymn" by FallenSky
- "the quiet agony and slight linger of beauty along every yein is so effectual.... and i adore yoour profile pic; very bernini, michelangelo....reminds me of all the efort to uncover every ounce of epicness and beauty......should read more of your works. "
Posted by Unknown on "In The Majesty of Silence, I Observe" by FallenSky
- "wow. this piece was amazing. I love the style and flow you gave this...I haven't read a piece like that in quite a while. How beautifully refreshing. "
Posted by RubyXero on "Among Bramble and Thorn" by FallenSky
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