Comments by All Members
- "this was a powerful waterfall crashing upon boulders. it echoed into the sound of the water pounding. and the rhyme flowed effortlessly."
Posted by Unknown on "The Mire" by LordBrosnian
- "and i'm enthralled in watching them twirl. there's nothing simplistic about this poem, it's heavy hitting and completely amazing in it's depth. i could pick at this for hours on end. i adore how you make me think, and wonder. thank you. ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "..its almost hard to go read more than a few or your works in one sitting..because i'm left with a complete mind shocking and numbing feeling that leads me to wonder, and wonder, and wonder some more. you make your words dance.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "there's something so powerfully profound about all your writes, that just leaves me staggering..your way with words its purely your own, and your depth within your lines is practically staggering in eloquence and a frightening quality.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- ""Entranced by honeyed scents deep in elysium didst I slip" Beautifully poetic, splendid rhyme structure...love the archaic, dark romantic dance; the eldritch seduction as drowned 'within an ardent kiss' Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Succubus" by LordBrosnian
- "Awesome structure!! (two exclamation points from me and i'm usually such a minimalist with 'em). This piece reminds me of Dani Filth's lyrics; I can hear wild blastbeat and majesty behind this. Rich, divine and decadent."
Posted by purr_verse on "Succubus" by LordBrosnian
- "this is amazing. the flow is perfect and i love the way youve constructed it. not many people can write like this. the last line is perfect. it brings the whole poem full circle. excellent work."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Dreamscape trifecta" by LordBrosnian
- "darling, you've got a wonderful way with words.. in particular, you give a stunning ending in each of your pieces so far. poetry, you perfect stranger."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The eye of god" by LordBrosnian
- "you've got a beautiful uniqueness about your style that one can feel within reading the first few words.. it is intense and mindblowing. utterly impressive. thank you for leading me to your words.. your perfect words."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "and with this , you amaze me. the ending was a masterpiece all on its own, and the body perfectly shaped and curved. this piece is as personal as sex with your lover."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "The poet boy" by LordBrosnian
- "I enjoyed your style, it is quite different than others I have read. A very beautiful and image forming piece you've created. Wonderful work."
Posted by K_Love on "Never Again" by LordBrosnian
- "Wow... This is awesome. Had I been alive a few hundred years ago this is probably the kind of thing I would do, a lot less proper of course, but the subject matter and presentation would be similar. You are a dark old soul. Beautiful write. ~Lost~ "
Posted by Unknown on "The Philanthropist" by LordBrosnian
- "You fear correctly.... but I must say that it did make you an interesting and talented writer indeed. Well done for pulling off a style that I would normally consider pretentious. Welcome to DP. ~Lost~"
Posted by Unknown on "A childhood - Forgotten" by LordBrosnian
- ""eleven pages of your soul" Beauty pure. "The calender which rested on the blank walls" Amazing imagery. "...In unconscious mirrors." Deeply layered. This is very well written, nicely formatted. I love the dark edge hidden beneath... I feel I am exposed"
Posted by Unknown on "Dreamscape trifecta" by LordBrosnian
- "I echo purr... this is another fabulous work. You'll have to forgive my lack of true commentary, but this has left me quite speechless. I'm off to reread..."
Posted by Raven on "Dreamscape trifecta" by LordBrosnian
- "This was absolutely astounding, both in presentation and vocabulary, as well as the story you spin. I look forward to reading more of your creations "
Posted by Raven on "Sea of tears" by LordBrosnian
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