Comments by All Members
- "outstanding! this applies to more than just down syndrome. i applaud you for writing this. U.P."
Posted by Unknown on "~Pain~" by Rebel_Angel
- " im doing a project on down syndrome too right now.. this is a good poem for it.. good job"
Posted by yslehc on "~Pain~" by Rebel_Angel
- "I can really feel this one, I have been there, and will go back to that beautiful pain again and again. Nice write keep it up .....Bloth
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Posted by SGT Bloth on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "*Chest pains* You have a knack for expression. I sorta know where you arecoming from, just from another perspective."
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by Rebel_Angel
- "beautiful... just remember that no matter how broken something is, there is always someone who can fix it."
Posted by Unknown on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "*sigh* i did finally find someone to help me mend my heart. altho there are fragments that are still missing. we are still looking. i dont have my hopes up tho. the idea of becoming jaded scares me. i like this one as well ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "i can relate to this. its strange how the whole evening plays out weeks before the actually event.. i like this.. ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Untitled" by Rebel_Angel
- "hmm. this is interesting. i don't completely understand, having not gone the path of drugs like that... but cutting is also a sweet and dangerous mistress..."
Posted by KittyStryker on "The Bitch" by Rebel_Angel
- "I never wen't to my homecoming, but I don't regret that. This poem was a bit confusing but I think I have it now. Really nice work here."
Posted by BlackRobedMage on "Untitled" by Rebel_Angel
- "haha ahh yes good poem..and I cant wait till my homecoming..but im glad i know the girl---brain"
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by Rebel_Angel
- "loneliness is the worst when you see the one you want, but if you had to tell him where to look, how to act, what to do, would he still be the one you want?"
Posted by a restless wanderer on " Open Your Eyes" by Rebel_Angel
- "don't lose hope.Just look at all the people who have commented with such wonderful support on your poem. Hope is powerful when in your heart."
Posted by Silver Spectre on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "my dear someday u will find someone like i found mine but have fun and dont worry, nice job on this write by the way very good"
Posted by Aurora_Light on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "This is getting really scary...we think to much a like...you have no Idea how many time i have said everything you wrote!!!! we could be twins!! I love the work....Great Job"
Posted by blackdarkness on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "many people pass many of our doors and contunie to walk by, but trust one day they'll wait and piece together all the pieces we have let shatter in our lifetime
another great expression
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Posted by BlackRobedMage on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "wow, i never robbed a bank for it, and glass is so much better but then again, it's still bad...oh well addiction is the price we pay for having pain that won't go away......or is it the other way around...."
Posted by HeLlSeND on "The Bitch" by Rebel_Angel
- "nice, the pieces allways seem to get smaller and harder to find, and each time you put it together again, more is missing......or maybe that's just me."
Posted by HeLlSeND on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "begin with loving yourself....and not looking for others...in the perfect time...the other will come...and fall right into place dear...good write...~vel~"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on " Broken" by Rebel_Angel
- "I've had this addiction before, I had to get away from a few people to rid myself of it...tell you friend he's expressed the feeling very well...~Delilah~"
Posted by Delilah on "The Bitch" by Rebel_Angel
- "Very strong emotion mixed in with great writing and good, constant flow. you don't find much of that anymore. Good write, good write. I like it. k.i.r.s.t.y.n"
Posted by wilted on " Open Your Eyes" by Rebel_Angel
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