~Pain~

By Rebel_Angel

Hey, I would like to know what everyone thinks. This is a piece to my multigenre research paper on Down Syndrome. My project is due in 2 weeks so please comment and let me know what you think. Thankz

I feel all alone in this world.
There are not many like me,
They think they understand everything,
but their far from the truth.
I try my hardest,
but will always be many years behind.
To be looked at like a monster,
all because I'm different.
I am a person too.
One who needs to be loved,
just like the rest.
If only people could see
all my hurt and pain,
Then maybe,
Just maybe,
They would understand

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Published on Thursday, October 30, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "~Pain~"

On Saturday, October 1, 2005, the dried flower (67) wrote:

i like
On Monday, November 10, 2003, frost bite (43) wrote:

If there were more people who fealt like that it would be an understanding but strange and timid world. nice write though, that should fit good
On Friday, November 7, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (64) wrote:

excellent. if more people thought like that then the world would be a better place. great write.
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

definitely thanks for sharing. With work like this, hopefully those who read will come closer to understanding. Or greaten their empathy for those less fortunate. :::OLd
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

yes it applies to anyone who is different..my niece is autistic...she doesnt even realize she is different...it's like it isn't her problem it is everyone elses..thanks for writing this hun.
On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

yes this is the aditude to have! I'm glade some do!
A former member wrote: i agree that this really does apply more to down syndrome i mean it applies to almost everyone and if people would only truley love eachother we would be in a better place right now good write M.H.A.
A former member wrote: outstanding! this applies to more than just down syndrome. i applaud you for writing this. U.P.
On Friday, October 31, 2003, BlackRobedMage (16) wrote:

This is an excellent work about Down Syndrome. Really well expressed.
On Friday, October 31, 2003, yslehc (334) wrote:

im doing a project on down syndrome too right now.. this is a good poem for it.. good job