Broken

By Rebel_Angel

Once again my heart has been shattered,
Like broken glass scattered aimlessly across the floor.
Waiting for someone to come along, and help pick up the pieces,
If only someone had the patience and time to help me mend my broken heart.
Someone to show me not all guys are stupid.
I just want to love and be loved,
Is that too much to ask for?
Maybe so in the world we live in today.
It is just made up of hatred and lies.
I will be ok for now,
For I'm used to picking up the pieces all alone,
Each time missing two key pieces, my hopes and dreams.
One day I will lose hope in everything and care about nothing if life goes on this way.

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Published on Wednesday, October 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on " Broken"

On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (42) wrote:

once again rings true and beautiful...i wish i had read ur works earlier
On Monday, May 10, 2004, asailorsangel (34) wrote:

You are the only one who holds those missing keys, when you learn to turn the keys the rest so gently in your hands the door will be open for the soul who completes you to turn the knob...
On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Tracer (99) wrote:

Not all of us suck, and there are those that will help you mend...I quite enjoyed your piece (not because of your suffering of course)...^vTracerv^
On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

guys do suck mostly.. nice write, pure and honest..
On Tuesday, October 28, 2003, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

I can really feel this one, I have been there, and will go back to that beautiful pain again and again. Nice write keep it up .....Bloth
A former member wrote: beautiful... just remember that no matter how broken something is, there is always someone who can fix it.
On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Drea (1388) wrote:

*sigh* i did finally find someone to help me mend my heart. altho there are fragments that are still missing. we are still looking. i dont have my hopes up tho. the idea of becoming jaded scares me. i like this one as well ~Drea~
On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Silver Spectre (95) wrote:

don't lose hope.Just look at all the people who have commented with such wonderful support on your poem. Hope is powerful when in your heart.
On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

my dear someday u will find someone like i found mine but have fun and dont worry, nice job on this write by the way very good
On Thursday, October 9, 2003, blackdarkness (227) wrote:

This is getting really scary...we think to much a like...you have no Idea how many time i have said everything you wrote!!!! we could be twins!! I love the work....Great Job
On Thursday, October 9, 2003, BlackRobedMage (16) wrote:

many people pass many of our doors and contunie to walk by, but trust one day they'll wait and piece together all the pieces we have let shatter in our lifetime another great expression
On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, HeLlSeND (40) wrote:

nice, the pieces allways seem to get smaller and harder to find, and each time you put it together again, more is missing......or maybe that's just me.
On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

begin with loving yourself....and not looking for others...in the perfect time...the other will come...and fall right into place dear...good write...~vel~
On Sunday, October 19, 2003, Crying_Banshee (62) wrote:

i just feel exactly the same way right now...anyway you read it...