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The Bitch
By Rebel_Angel
This was writen by a friend of mine who asked me to post it for him please
let me know what oyu think and I will forward the message to him. Thank
you!
Each step I take now marked by death
The downward spiral of crystal meth
I sampled a bump and I was sold
A fine beige powder more precious than gold
She keeps me up, my body slims
A once bright future like twilight dims
I used to crave a cap or two,
Then a ball, now an ounce won't do!
She helps me dance, she makes me rush
She rots my spinal cord to mush
She's a slut, a common whore;
This only makes me want her more
She makes me smile, she gets me high
Without the BITCH i feel I'll die
Only at parties?, ( Just one more time)
She led me down a path of crime
I sold my ass I robbed some banks
All for her; She gave no thanks
Each step I take sill marked by death
Cause once again I'm snorting meth.
By:Joe Geiger
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Tuesday, July 1, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
i really like it ...it's make me think of a part of ourself that make us different , unique and in the same time we hate it but need it ....it's well written
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On Wednesday, January 9, 2008, totaltrip
(36)
wrote:
hm
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On Monday, January 7, 2008, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
it was very good and mind boggling.
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On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
good rhyme on this - i like it
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A former member wrote:
I can totally relate to this - Dark__Goddes-
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoyed this poem and could relate (to a point) I wasn't such a fan of BITCH being in CAPS. That seemed kind of lame, but other than that amazing.. Well done
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A former member wrote:
i culdnt take my eyes off it it was inspiring and yet grim and morbid
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Like wise, I found this to be not a work that dropped my attention before the last syllable. ~JMDW~
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On Wednesday, December 31, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
WoW tell Joe I'm feelin him big time...been there done that...still there doing that...but 1 ?? to Hellsend..whats the diff between meth and glass...same thing No?
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I'm not sure the difference, I haven't talked to Joe in a while but if I do I will ask him and let you know.
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On Wednesday, December 31, 2003, Deja vu
(6) wrote:
all it takes is one more time.. a beautiful mind is one who can step out of their own situation and see it for what it really is
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
hmm. this is interesting. i don't completely understand, having not gone the path of drugs like that... but cutting is also a sweet and dangerous mistress...
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
wow, i never robbed a bank for it, and glass is so much better but then again, it's still bad...oh well addiction is the price we pay for having pain that won't go away......or is it the other way around....
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
I've had this addiction before, I had to get away from a few people to rid myself of it...tell you friend he's expressed the feeling very well...~Delilah~
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
tell joe i said great write!
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
I know who he feels i used to do meth...a lot...i dont anymore but this was VERY well done i love it...Blacky
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A former member wrote:
OMFG I LOVE LOVE LOVE this piece if I could add favs...this would go in it (and no I don't do meth) lol
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On Monday, July 7, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
lovely. you know i wrote that lemon pie pome you wanted... -B
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hmm do i know him my friend? but even if i do i still like and a gree w/ Markus Porkwing drugs r bad ;)
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On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
oppsies great* sorries
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, Amanda Parnell
(57) wrote:
This was a very good peice. Very much enjoyed. I loved the way it rhymed, but didn't sound corney. Most def. getting added to my fav. list. *kitten*
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A former member wrote:
Drugs are bad!
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On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
ditto. good poem tho! i do so enjoy rhyme :)
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A former member wrote:
that was really good! but sad at the same time...
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