Comments by All Members
- "Pain was brought back in a uncertain way,
forgetting a love cant be forever
for the pain brings the memories of what was,
whats lost is lost but can be found, search hard and wise,
cracks of pain cracks of life."
Posted by Unknown on "Dredging up the Past" by Spyral
- "yeah...it stabs in parts; it's not in the least bit smooth....but their is a gentle shimmer to this; like a lake in dark light...rather than post something unfinished why not re-edit it at a later date to post"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Dilusional" by Spyral
- "i know both sides of the fence on this one. I like the way you expressed yours though. You should give a copy of this to whom you wrote it for."
Posted by Unknown on "Mind Fuck" by Spyral
- ""The scent of you lingers/stuck to my pillowcase/The only trace of you left behind." Yes, to have something always there to remind you of the love you once lived is, although painful, a beautiful thing as well. Wonderful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "The scent of you Lingers" by Spyral
- "A scent, the trace of him or her; not the remembered sight or touch, but something real, a part of them that is actually HERE, what a joyous thing!
This was loveley. - Michael"
Posted by BlackBear on "The scent of you Lingers" by Spyral
- "i use to smell that on my pillow too, the trick is to wash it! but this was beautifully, soft, sensual and lonely...relatable...it is no good to wallow in our despair...it can consume us...like it almost did me...lovely write -=ak=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "The scent of you Lingers" by Spyral
- "This rips my heart out every time I read it, and it reiterates one of the ongoing series of thoughts I almost constantly have."
Posted by Echo on "Mind Fuck" by Spyral
- "God...."I was offering you everything/Yet I wasn't enough" are you in my thoughts? "
Posted by dying angel on "Mind Fuck" by Spyral
- "I read this piece and it just inspired me...thank you for being my muse and for the comments"
Posted by Unknown on "Mind Fuck" by Spyral
- "this is a lot like I see... i'm impressed at your maturity... keep speaking for the people and for the children like this... 1LOVE, Seth"
Posted by Mr King on "Dilusional Society" by Spyral
- "Oh man...this struck like a twelve-pound hammer hitting a nail into my heart...this is breathingly beautiful...excellent concept, beautiful wording...muah! I love it. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Drunken Confessions" by Spyral
- "Sadness...despair...frustration.Screaming,"I love you" to him (at the top of your lungs)from across a meadow...millions of miles between you...the space between you is the enemy.Well done."
Posted by suicideseason on "Why don't you see?" by Spyral
- "I wish it kept going, but then again you run out of senses i would think.. its a good poem, i really like it..nice one"
Posted by Unknown on "Why don't you see?" by Spyral
- "I really like this but I also agree with Jerrica, maybe you were never over it, you were just fooling yourself. Either way great write, welcome!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dredging up the Past" by Spyral
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