Why don't you see?

By Spyral

Look at me

Don't you see me waiting
Waiting to be alone
For the second we don't have to pretend

Touch me

Can't you see me going insane?
All i need is to feel you
Feel your heart beat under my palm

Kiss me

Can't you feel me
Shaking underneath you
I feel your lips upon mine

Understand me

Can't you see my thoughts
my eyes betray me
The emotions show like the moon

Be with me

Why can you not see this love?
Can you not feel it on my hands
Can you not feel it when our lips meet
Do you not see it in my eyes?

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© 2005 Brandy L Taylor
Published on Tuesday, October 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    intensely powerful and beautiful

  • A former member wrote: Nice...keep up the good work

  • A former member wrote: I wish it kept going, but then again you run out of senses i would think.. its a good poem, i really like it..nice one

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