Dilusional

By Spyral

Dilusional to think of love
Instant knowledge upon meeting of eyes

Souls entertwined
As our limbs are
Minds Overinteligent
Or attempting to be

Existing on a higher plane
Searching for the part you took
When you turned your back on me

Hidding to stop the emotions
Let us all hope the dam holds
mixed with tears is blood

It felt like destiny when our bodies met
Not the hopeless lust you describe

--This is unfinished, i hit a block.. Please leave a comment and help me out with this..I'm lost with what to do to finish it, Thanks... Brandy

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Brandy L. Taylor
Published on Sunday, October 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: umm lets see...spellcheck and thats all i can think of.

  • veingo On Sunday, October 9, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Just be honest about the feeling you were left with after the encounter.(That's what I think.) *V*

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