Comments by All Members
- "A really good ending on this piece. "Dignity left with the century, Honor fell asleep at the wheel, Decency may be the next to go, Depending on how we feel." Also good rhythm. Very truthful"
Posted by Unknown on "Hush" by Last1inLine
- "oh this was fucking brilliant! i dont know why but im giggling insanely and all i can say is hell yeah but that last word felt so final and damning, great write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "52 Card Pickup" by Last1inLine
- "awesome lyrics... nice steady rhyme without the predictability. This song could be oh so addictive."
Posted by flying_fox on "Hush" by Last1inLine
- "Damn man. First half set up the steak driving in to the heart of the second half. Frustration at its best, what can you do when your mind's set to giving a fuck? Too cool."
Posted by Unknown on "You Play Me Like a Fiddle." by Last1inLine
- "..why does this not have a single comment..~and your bitter words reinforce the ice in these veins~ this reminded me of winter..a cold touch of a lover that holds no love..beautiful in its tragedy ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "You Play Me Like a Fiddle." by Last1inLine
- "..wow. this sucked me in most beautifully. i loved the entire thing, it pounded gently in my head, resonating in my brain. and now these words you have drawn are etched in my skull..this was simply fabulous..nothing else can be said. ~bethany"
Posted by Unknown on "Wonderland" by Last1inLine
- "brilliantly said...i cant believe this doesnt have more comments...and in case i failed to mention it before welcome to DP ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Hush" by Last1inLine
- "~This porcelain won't ever come clean Yeah - so far beyond stained These white walls drip with her desperate laughter this bed cries out her name~ that verse left me with such vivid images and the title alone was worthy of praise ~kristy "
Posted by Sin on "Mausoleum Beauty Queen" by Last1inLine
- "i really liked the quiet depths in this; i also think i'd very much like to hear it. I can't help ascribing it a melody (it's kinda lilting and melancholy with being Grandiose, if that makes sense)...I hope it's not too far off what you envisioned. Great "
Posted by purr_verse on "Silver Ring" by Last1inLine
- "wow this was different. your play of stanzas and words even, is as flicker fleeting retreating as a humming bird then one realises the title. =) great work. ~m~"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Wonderland" by Last1inLine
- ""Not to be confused, my dear, with a hero
Because occasionally one and one still amount to zero" and "But this cover-up, or so its called runs thin
& if you tell me you're drowning...
I'll jump in." Fucking incredible lines. Very shibby. ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "Wonderland" by Last1inLine
- "The flow in this was fantastic, really liked "Burn
it
to
the
ground
This home
we found
until
the ashes
fall
like rain" Very cool thought stream. ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "Mausoleum Beauty Queen" by Last1inLine
- ""Under the dinner table
we all hold the smoking gun
so when you go to point your finger
don't forget anyone" This and the very last part too, good God. I've been thinking about this idea a lot lately. You put perfectly. ~Ryan"
Posted by Unknown on "Hush" by Last1inLine
- " I am not a gal of many words, but I do commend you on this write....its eerily catchy, and sums up the world in its entirety"
Posted by Unknown on "Hush" by Last1inLine
