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Mausoleum Beauty Queen
By Last1inLine
'What a crying shame' they say
as her life slips from her veins
Cover her eyes with copper
disguising her fear and walk away
Such
a
bitter
smile
my Dear Mariah
will not
ever
be
the same
This porcelain won't ever come clean
Yeah - so far beyond stained
These white walls drip with her desperate laughter
this bed cries out her name
Burn
it
to
the
ground
This home
we found
until
the ashes
fall
like rain
This world is EMPTY without you
my angel in crime
I feel I'm wasting away
my breath
my life
my time
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Copyright 2005 Last1inLine
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On Thursday, September 22, 2005, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
~This porcelain won't ever come clean Yeah - so far beyond stained These white walls drip with her desperate laughter this bed cries out her name~ that verse left me with such vivid images and the title alone was worthy of praise ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
The flow in this was fantastic, really liked "Burn
it
to
the
ground
This home
we found
until
the ashes
fall
like rain" Very cool thought stream. ~Ryan
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On Thursday, August 18, 2005, Possesion
(137) wrote:
Wow, Really great write.
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On Thursday, August 18, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wonderful peice. Welcome to DP
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On Thursday, August 18, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
Welcome to DP. This is a good peice. I really like the flow.
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