Silver Ring
By Last1inLine
She's a curious girl
and it shows on her lips.
She tells me that people don't understand her
Her parents pray around the table
she doesn't see the point
She tells me that gods not paying attention
And I'm not sure just if she's wrong or right
She says that it's because I can't help but see
in black and white
But for some strange reason she feels safe next to me
She says that certain things were just meant to be.
I might be the only one
who ever listened to a word she said
but she says that she doesn't really mind
She wears a silver ring
on a chain around her neck
She tells me that it keeps me close to her heart
And I'm not sure just if she's wrong or right
She says that it's because I can't help but see
in black and white
But for some strange reason she feels safe next to me
She says that certain things were just meant to be.
After all this time
I've never seen her cry
And after all this time
I've never asked myself why
When I look at her
I see the sorrow in her eyes
I'll remember that look
until the day that I die.
Comments on "Silver Ring"
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
write. (ahhfkk! I hate it when it truncates one word.)
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
i really liked the quiet depths in this; i also think i'd very much like to hear it. I can't help ascribing it a melody (it's kinda lilting and melancholy with being Grandiose, if that makes sense)...I hope it's not too far off what you envisioned. Great
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
very beautiful. i love the imagery. amazing!