Comments by All Members
- "i love this write it was extremely emotional and its like you read my mind on how ive felt but my cuts are healing and someone is TRYING to put me together...only if he could...you are extremely talented!"
Posted by Angi on "You Tore My Heart to Pieces (The Whole Story)" by l mo
- "This is awesome!Its really emotional a love lost and then the healing process begins.''you tore my heart to pieces when you said you didnt love me.even more when you kissed her where everyone could see''It hits home my ex did that to me what a dick lol"
Posted by Unknown on "You Tore My Heart to Pieces (The Whole Story)" by l mo
- "oh, she does. in some certain ways...she's VERY special...."
Posted by l mo on "True Friend" by l mo
- "very defined...control...you wrap it all up.hard to do with such a word.very nice job"
Posted by abattoir on "Control" by l mo
- "Don't listen to anyone who say cutting is annoying and pointless, becausethey do something just as bad. beautiful poem."
Posted by Anybody_Killette on "Cut" by l mo
- "Yeah, well written, its understandable, I find cutting and cutters highly annoying more than anything else. Get it out of your head, as it will provide nothing but irritation."
Posted by Doc on "Cut" by l mo
- "vivid image, have you ever read "A Rose for Emily", I cant think of the author, but its a fairly well known author, maybe Faulkner or Poe. This poem reminds me of it."
Posted by Doc on "The Forgotten Rose" by l mo
- "cutting is so cliche and pathetic...this wasn't a badly written poem, though...-l-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Cut" by l mo
- "yeah. my friend had just told me that she started cutting again after like, 4 months, so i had to get the subject out of my head and this was the result...."
Posted by l mo on "Cut" by l mo
- "ugh. its nicly written but i hate the subject, im sure most of dp will agree."
Posted by Unknown on "Cut" by l mo
- "I know it's not a good idea to kill yourself over someone, that's what I told her. Luckily, she listened."
Posted by l mo on "I'll Be With You Soon" by l mo
- "I just want to clear a few things up... THIS IS NOT BASED ON ME! My friend lost someone very close to her this summer because they killed themselves. She was talking to me about how if one more person dies on her, she would kill herself. And, yes, I know "
Posted by l mo on "I'll Be With You Soon" by l mo
- "i liked this...i like poems like this
great pure emotions are in this and i like that"
Posted by Unknown on "True Friend" by l mo
- "i think that is a terrific write i have lots of suicidal writes but i wish i could do it without hurting the people who love me but you got talent...excelent job"
Posted by Angi on "You don't mean what you say..." by l mo
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