"Contrivance"
By Grim_Sorrow
"Contrivance"
so sick of these
man made impurities
each sprocket cog and circuit board
evolution of mind and technology
not of body as life intends
yet we defend
the style
sense
and simplicities
our egotistical grasp of right
purpose
and possibilities
it’s in these ways we lack basic humility
the sanity to protect our longevity
manifest humanities insecurities
this atrocity
it's over
a new breed of metal and mass
man made superiority
let it pass
the last of mans responsibilities
left to the artless
heartless
and
unimaginative
it’s our need to create that kills us
the need to advance that wills us
so impatient
mankind’s views
and desires
it’s here and now
want and need
that will lead to the silence
ever growing
never knowing
impervious to the task at hand
yet we demand,
desire,
require simplicity
the ability
to live out or days in infamy
the death throws of work, effort, and humility
machinery
Comments on ""Contrivance""
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A former member wrote:
An excellent flow of ideas. Your mind is a powerhouse.
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On Friday, June 29, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
I agree with SalemLex and Mab. It was really amazing! Good concept, good write.
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Err0r
(358) wrote:
The transition from line to line is fantastic! I love every word you've spewed out from here.
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, SalemLex
(25) wrote:
Good shit! Love the concept. Very true.
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A former member wrote:
This was fuckin great. The flow was fast and yet my eyes were pierced by every word. A sadly true message, thanks for your thought stream. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
wicked write from start to finish!
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Reminds me of a Koontz's novel, and yet the title of which escapes me. *pot head moment, my Girlfriend calls it* But this is an excellent write, homes. Great imagery. I see, as Koontz's villian saw, human organs and arteries, intertwined with wires and
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On Tuesday, June 19, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
chords. Bloody good read.
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Spiral Downward
(388) wrote:
Was it Demon Seed?
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A former member wrote:
'Fall Of The Dream Machine' perhaps?
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A former member wrote:
Thats dope... And slowly we are the machines!! ~OttO~