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Within the Clouds
By Preacher X
On the ground I softly lay,
Allowing my mind to sit at bay.
In my head the images fly,
Of the clouds passing by.
As I rest on the ground,
I feel my body spin around.
Into the air I softly glide,
As I fly into the sky.
In the sky, I see in my eye,
A light which I had not seen in flight.
Soon I realize I am wearing shrouds,
For I had died within the clouds.
Lawrence E Mitchell
Janurary 6, 1997
3:3/1
Death Bed
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© 1997-2007 Lawrence E Mitchell
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, Moonflower
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wrote:
ooh made me feel light and happy. very pretty!
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On Thursday, June 7, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Reminds me of system of a down, for some odd reason. "I know time reveals in hindsight, but I can't see you through the snowblind."
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2007, thelostmessenger
(112) wrote:
pretty, like flying as you wrote about. great write. *messenger
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
i love the sky, and the effect it can have on so many things, i like your work to, good write ~*danni*~
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2007, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
Good work, enjoyed it ~Crow
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2007, Midian
(19) wrote:
This one is not really my style, but I do like it. Good write.
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