Mrs. Submissive

By glasshouse

i will not kneel
i will not bow
and open my mouth
to seek your pleasure before my own
(even if salvation
lies solely in the back of my throat)

i will not sit and listen
seen and never heard
and i wont form my life
to your melody
or words
(it was never me
who inspired your ugliness anyway)

i will not find peace
in your maniacal preaching
when your message isnt love
(it isnt even lovely)

i will not open my heart
or my legs
to welcome you
to all that dwells therein

and i will not be your sin
or your atonement

i wont be left alone
to hand out heartache as i please
while you revel in the glory
of my unquestioning submission

and
i will not
i will not be moved
i will not be moved by you

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Published on Monday, May 14, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Mrs. Submissive"

On Wednesday, February 20, 2008, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

This was beautiful. Cold and brutal, yet spoken in words that sing.
A former member wrote: very powerful and unique. so far from cheeky but much more assertive in knowing yourself. so few do
On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (163) wrote:

I can believe you mean these words. If I didnt then this would be horror. I hate watching people try to fufill themselves and fail. I would rather watch death then. I am not proud of that fact. But you should be proud of this.
On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

It's a shame in the year 2007, that many men haven't evolved beyond what you describe. But then, if man truly evolved, he would become woman =) Good, strong write. -Carl
A former member wrote: the final stanza spoke like a shot... bravo
On Saturday, June 16, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Thats so unfair of you... No realy. This was words of impact. Powerfull and as allways I as a a man feel the urge to scream after reading such writes
On Monday, May 21, 2007, Moonflower (298) wrote:

love it.
On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

I agree with Col, this is wonderful chanting style flow. Outstanding.
A former member wrote: i remember this one from the unearthly, resolute ending. still solid. ness