Snorting Stardust
By BeautifullyRuined
I crushed the stars in my hand
and laughed at the massacre of wishes
I wanted to be that HIGH
snorting stardust like cocaine
making a wish everytime i hit a line
they didnt come true
as the sky turned black i cried for you
nothing left but the moon
i would destroy that to
but i always loved the way
it reflected in your eyes
shining so bright
it made me blind
snorting another line
waiting for the night to die
it was always our time
now i`m spending it alone
wishing that somehow i could die with it
but as i said wishes are bullshit
and when the sun rises
i`ll still be sitting here
...wishing you were too.
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© 2007 BeautifullyRuined
Published on Sunday, May 13, 2007.
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
the title and concept was hot, and a breath of fresh air to the star concept that is over done on this site, made me wish i had some stardust!!!! i cant tell you how much i love your lingo, it seems to cripple me.
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
you should hand out free crutches along with your work. write on, ink finger girl...
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On Monday, May 14, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(93) wrote:
Thanks everyone for the comments.
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On Sunday, May 13, 2007, openureyes
(55) wrote:
I wish wishes wrent bull shit... sigh... beautiful work. liked this alot ~Robyn
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On Sunday, May 13, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
Beautiful and vived. so many lines i would like to quote.. and the ending. wonderful.
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On Sunday, May 13, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
wishing on dead stars... damn, you nailed this one, i can definitely relate...
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A former member wrote:
I loved this! I could picture you squeezing until they bled silver between your fingers...I wanted to quote the entire first stanza...greatness
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A former member wrote:
This has to be the best thing I read in a long time. So full of raw emotions. I'm saving this one for sure.
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A former member wrote:
Loved it, and yes, wishes are bullshit.
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully vivid. This has so much feeling behind it, and you conveyed it so so very well. What an image. ....-Samone