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Want (this is love)
By Disassembly Boy
"How does it feel to want?"
The words fell from her mouth like murder, bloody murder.
On a night like this I've never wanted more.
The red and the angry,
The gripping of throats...
.. The sound of our choking love.. (so shrill)
So high
And the moon's so hot tonight..
Can you see me in the darkness
Waiting for your spark?
If you lead
I will follow..
..But instead I'm left for dead..
.. Left screaming.
And you'll never hear me..
You'll never save me.
Sometimes I've wished I'd never let you inside,
You've butchered all the tiny parts,
The massacre of my heart..
So tell me, my dear, when you go in for the kill
Will you stab me in adoration
Or your hate for me?
(grr..really unhappy with the way it ended up.... I may need to "improve"
it a bit.. .. in the meantime, enjoy!)
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© 2007 PRiCk K. M. Nelson
Published on Monday, February 12, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Want (this is love)"
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On Monday, October 10, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593)
wrote:
I think you wrote it how it was meant to be written. Well done. - 10:43
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On Monday, October 22, 2007, totaltrip
(36) wrote:
i think the beginning is really really good. kind of hot even. :)
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On Wednesday, May 9, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
I really enjoyed the ending.
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On Sunday, March 4, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
Well, I think it fit nicely just as it is. Emotionally pointed to say the least. ~b
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Dude no reason to change it. I luh huv it.
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A former member wrote:
i agree... theres ways for it to get better, but its good overall. and once your good, it can only get better
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A former member wrote:
To be honest, I enjoyed it, but there is room for improvement.
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