Cockroach

By Disassembly Boy

I remember, so sickly,
You crawling on your belly
like a cockroach.
Making your way towards me
with a compound eye.

All you saw was broken.
Shattered pieces of me spread in vast expansion.

If only you knew what you were heading for,
maybe you'd be running the other way.

I remember feeling sorry for you,
but not really caring.
Just feeling sorry.
The greed of hunger is visceral,
and so is the notion of killing you.

But I love to watch you tremble,
watch you move; anticipate.

You live your life in darkness
only to be exposed; Vulnerable.
Smashed.

And I remember every second,
thinking to myself
how small you've made me feel,
how many times you've crawled inside,
made me sick.. Crushed me.

And without a second thought
I felt you crack beneath the weight of my shoe
then quickly walked away.

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© 2007 PRiCk K. M. Nelson
Published on Sunday, February 11, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Wednesday, February 9, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    I was left breathless. Write on!

  • estherbell On Wednesday, October 29, 2008, estherbell (52)By person wrote:

    brilliant.i am getting used to killing cockroaches these days.haha.

  • Err0r On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    At the end is it more of a fear of what you did? ....dpmail me. I'm curious.

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, May 1, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    yet another piece i just love.

  • coly On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, coly (54)By person wrote:

    this was aswome it realy made me see the emotion

  • prettydisgrace On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, prettydisgrace (93)By person wrote:

    Again i really enjoyed this.. another great piece.

  • A former member wrote: Revenge is sweet. I love this piece. Makes me feel good to read. I love the use of metaphor.

  • Sin On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    i can only echo everyone else..very impressive, warm welcomes to the DP family ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: I agree with Carlos. The ending was beautiful. Well done, once again.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, February 11, 2007, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Excellent, excellent piece..I think you could be one to watch..Welcome To DP!!

  • A former member wrote: I love the metaphor of this piece. I might just have to read more when you get more posted.

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