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Memorie
By veingo
I sometimes wonder if you still think about it.
As I so often do.
The two of us,
lying in bed together for the first time.
You laughed,
so I laughed.
It was uncontrollable,
and we just couldn't stifle it.
And we both couldn't stop.
Sharing an overwhelming joy,
that couldn't be contained.
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If I could take a piece of time
in my hands.
I'd be gentle,
but firm enough to hold it still.
This is the moment I'd choose.
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© 2007 veingo
Published on Sunday, February 11, 2007.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
short but oh so sweet. Very well done
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On Friday, June 29, 2012, jodeanna
(41)
wrote:
This was stunning in its simplicity and its beauty. Marvelous!
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On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Very beautiful. Sounds like you found a way to always be able to hold this moment afterall. Nicely written :)
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On Saturday, May 26, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Oh Ronnykins, you just stole my breath. Might I have it back?
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A former member wrote:
I wish in opposite directions...to be held onto gently yet strongly by a moment...*smiles* very nice write V. ~RAIN~
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A former member wrote:
very touching and sweet
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
still love this.
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was beautiful Ron I can't believe this got passed me and I didn't notice.. It made me smile and think of incredible moments that I could compare this to.. Your incredible *muah* ~Mirrored Nymph
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
this was timeless. so beautiful. romantically stunning.
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A former member wrote:
"I'd be gentle, but firm enough to hold it still." *sighs* I've missed your posts...and this...spoke in painful melodies of longing to go back...and wishing you'd held on just a little tighter. Excellent, as always. ~*Beth*~
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A former member wrote:
I had a reminiscence with my own memory. Sorrowfully beautiful, mine was. Hopeful yours is more joyful.
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A former member wrote:
oh yes..very sweet and beautiful. made me think of my own =]
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A former member wrote:
Aw. good memories :) ....-samone
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On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
...this was beautiful..you captured a real moment *smiles*
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A former member wrote:
damn. this was perfectly written. ~ red.
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