Memorie

By veingo

I sometimes wonder if you still think about it.

As I so often do.

The two of us,
lying in bed together for the first time.

You laughed,

so I laughed.

It was uncontrollable,
and we just couldn't stifle it.

And we both couldn't stop.

Sharing an overwhelming joy,
that couldn't be contained.
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If I could take a piece of time
in my hands.

I'd be gentle,
but firm enough to hold it still.

This is the moment I'd choose.

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Published on Sunday, February 11, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Memorie"

A former member wrote: short but oh so sweet. Very well done
On Friday, June 29, 2012, jodeanna (41) wrote:

This was stunning in its simplicity and its beauty. Marvelous!
On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, Dilated View (582) wrote:

Very beautiful. Sounds like you found a way to always be able to hold this moment afterall. Nicely written :)
On Saturday, May 26, 2007, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Oh Ronnykins, you just stole my breath. Might I have it back?
A former member wrote: I wish in opposite directions...to be held onto gently yet strongly by a moment...*smiles* very nice write V. ~RAIN~
A former member wrote: very touching and sweet
On Monday, February 26, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

still love this.
On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

This was beautiful Ron I can't believe this got passed me and I didn't notice.. It made me smile and think of incredible moments that I could compare this to.. Your incredible *muah* ~Mirrored Nymph
On Friday, February 16, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

this was timeless. so beautiful. romantically stunning.
A former member wrote: "I'd be gentle, but firm enough to hold it still." *sighs* I've missed your posts...and this...spoke in painful melodies of longing to go back...and wishing you'd held on just a little tighter. Excellent, as always. ~*Beth*~
A former member wrote: I had a reminiscence with my own memory. Sorrowfully beautiful, mine was. Hopeful yours is more joyful.
A former member wrote: oh yes..very sweet and beautiful. made me think of my own =]
A former member wrote: Aw. good memories :) ....-samone
On Sunday, February 11, 2007, Sin (1135) wrote:

...this was beautiful..you captured a real moment *smiles*
A former member wrote: damn. this was perfectly written. ~ red.