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I could look at you forever
By Tadakimacun
I could look at you forever,
Watch you sleep next to me
(Mouth slightly open, you snore like a purring dragon
Lashes half gold-and-chocolate on pale cheeks)
I could look at you forever,
Admire you until sight left me
(Perfect Grecian statue brought to rosy breathing life;
Dare I kiss you to assure my lips you're real?)
I could look at you forever,
Idly dream of what you are
(Newly-fallen angel, halo not yet slipped-
If I went to feel your back I'd find
The scars of new-lost wings)
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© 2006 Tadakimacun
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On Saturday, March 1, 2008, carlosjackal
(2786)
wrote:
Fabulous, fabulous piece..and the clincher.."If I ventured to feel your back I'd find The scars of long-lost wings)" Write on! =) -Carl
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On Friday, December 1, 2006, Tadakimacun
(7) wrote:
I'm glad people like it! I thought it up while watching my current boyfriend sleep. This one is dedicated to him, so HI PALMTREE!!! ^.^
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
this is pretty =]
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A former member wrote:
its abousloutly wonderful it shows some thing still is purly beautiful in this world. write on. ^.^alex
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A former member wrote:
"(Newly-fallen angel, halo not yet slipped..." Wow...just wow...the imagery in this piece is breathtaking. I'm left gasping, in the hopes that I might one day see something so beautiful. ~*Beth*~
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On Thursday, November 30, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Beautiful. Write on, Carly.
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