Why me?

By HalfDarkAngel

I don't get it
Out of everything that could ever happen
All that could be good
I get the terrible things
Those I love are ripped from my life
Through death or other means
I lose my home, I'm isolated from my friends
I keep telling myself the only thing I have left to lose
is my life






What life?

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© 2006 HalfDarkAngel
Published on Tuesday, October 10, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Monday, June 20, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I have been there... Nice write! Scholar

  • Rhys Ki On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Rhys Ki (68)By person wrote:

    I agree whole-heartedly with puppet show... good nonetheless.

  • A former member wrote: thats so sad things will perk up just wait it out kay?

  • Aunty Depressant On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    Don't say that! You're just asking for it when you say it can't get any worse! There is always something more to lose. I think or Orwell's writings of a man going to gallows, and still has dignity.

  • A former member wrote: Thats Rockbottom. Just think. It can't get any worse.

  • A_Puppet_Show On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    A fragile question. Perfect in the way it is formed. What I mean is that if I am to picture myself having lost all I might ask this in the same way. Living fragility is frowned upon as art, it is becouse many nations build around martyrdom.

  • A_Puppet_Show On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    Said in other words, you are alowed to be fragile when you are dead, then the pain you had in life can be elevated to art. Not before, so this question will get prestige when you are dead. DP is the same, and would act the same upon your death.

  • A_Puppet_Show On Tuesday, October 10, 2006, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    It is very pure in form and I like it, but it is deeply wrong compared to how the world in general works, to even ask it. Tiger

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