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Self-Destructive Patterns
By LOKI
This is my world
My prison
My hell
This is my torment
My weakness unveiled
Self-Destructive patterns
begin to emerge
In the dark it gets quiet
even screams go unheard
This is my world
My prison
My hell
This my anger
My hatred prevails
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© 2006 LOKI
Published on Thursday, October 5, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Self-Destructive Patterns"
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On Thursday, December 21, 2006, LOKI
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wrote:
yea i like spineshank.I have 3 of thier albums.Funny i didnt catch that.Thanks
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A former member wrote:
...yeah i'm a musicaian, songwriter & guitarist.
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A former member wrote:
i have just executed a perfect example of what you foretell.
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A former member wrote:
i like your poem i can understand it from my point of view
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On Thursday, October 5, 2006, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
Simplicity, clarity and a message - This poem scores a hat-trick.
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On Thursday, October 5, 2006, LOKI
(164) wrote:
thank you for the feed back
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On Thursday, October 5, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Simple, to the point, the inner workings, the effect in the end.
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On Thursday, October 5, 2006, Storm
(143) wrote:
Very vivid and powerful, like a magnet to my eyes and mind. ~S
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