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Within a Dream
By Midnight Phoenix
A dream within a dream while drifting from home to hell
Forever known but hoped it would never end up this way
Carried by a one way sign along the road I follow
The skies are endless but cloudy while the air fades grey
Shaded in the quiet reflections of a past life I once knew
The scene never changes until the end nears
This empty heart so deeply drained and attuned to dysphoria
The street cracked and lonely waited silently as I passed by
Into the next world I continued without knowing
There was no wind for me to feel, no sound for me to hear
Like a wandering spirit, I disappeared
There were only faces to my sins, faces to my fears
Like a wandering spirit, I disappeared
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Tuesday, April 8, 2003.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, nesbia
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wrote:
lovely *~Kali~*
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A former member wrote:
i think i'm going to tuck you into my favoriet's list, as soon as matt has it up and running again; because this completely blew my mind. Outstanding, to say very little.
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A former member wrote:
amazing, is all i can say.
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A former member wrote:
um..wow..i got some pretty strong feelings from this one
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A former member wrote:
Vary good work with this poem it makes me think
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A former member wrote:
WOnderful....you stole my words once more....
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
I'm really starting love your work. Everything I've read so far has this over cast feeling to it that accompanies each thoughtful concept very, very well. So resolute and endless...*BRAVO*~DW~
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Oh yeah...and do you do POE?.... "And all we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream"...E.A.Poe...~DW~
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A former member wrote:
you have a unique poetry style. i enjoyed this poem. it made me reflect on a few things.
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