He talks to me like I am shit

By blackdarkness

A play thing tossed aside
2 dimensional people have more effect
Screen flickering
Casting odd shadows across his face

“STOP ASKING QUESTIONS!!”

- “IAM AN ADULT! I CAN ASK WHATEVER I WANT”

Tension building in my arms
I am nothing to him
Cold eyes tear thru my heart
Love spills

“LEAVE ME ALONE! I DON’T HAVE TIME FOR YOU IAM IN A GAME!”

2 dimensional life
his happiness
The screen is hypnotizing
Sucking the life out
Draining his energy
Disintegration…

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© 2006 blackdarkness
Published on Tuesday, September 5, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: kinda of enjoyed the dialogue i love it when a poet does that in a work.

  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, September 17, 2007, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I know I'm a little late in commenting, but...I'm sorry you had to go through this and I'd like to tell you you can do better, but it's always hard to know this on your own...I hope your situation is better today.

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, June 9, 2007, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    i'd fuckin leave him.. if someone to treat me that bad i'd do 2 things.. 1: beat the ever living shit out of them, 2: leave

  • A former member wrote: wow. makes me glad im single :P ~ red.

  • Cattarax On Thursday, September 7, 2006, Cattarax (211)By person wrote:

    ....... Wow .. you are a better women then I am .. when I want attention i demand it .. :) ~T~

  • A former member wrote: Once again, I found a poem about love and it's not a happy one. Le sigh. Love why do we do it.

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