A Rockstar's Ranting, The Acid Orchestra

By Rebel_not_Radical

*plug in the magic amplifier and pluck
me some tunes out of thin airrr*


-introoo-


Revolving guitars in my head...
in my head...
in my head..

-strums to an oscillating beat and
shifts from chord to chord-

Speak to me...
In gasping breaths...


If you have a damn gun between your teeth
Can you still speak fluently you bitch?



-power chord-
Now you're dead.


-power chord-
Now you're dead..



-POWEEERR CHORDD-
NOW YOU'RE FUCKING DEAD!!!



-soft drum beats of indie musicality
quickly shifting to a fortissimo of brutality-


Embalm me with fire.......

Argh no no no no no no no no no...


NO!!!!


IT FUCKING BURRRNSSS!!!


-the underlying bass line which started minutes ago
was menacingly grim, like the fingers which plays it-


I regurgitate a mouthful of la-la's
And moan like thousands of children crying
Damn! My innards were dying


-And the instruments swoon to the metronome
of destruction...and they are in harmonic acid-


-hmmmm.........acid-


*and I smack my lips with satiation spiked with supression*



I've always wanted to destroy something so pure and beatiful...

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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Wednesday, August 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Monday, October 8, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    The mind of a rock star, very interesting. I really like the format and flow, fun read.

  • A former member wrote: absolutely amazing!

  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, October 8, 2012, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    with a swing of your hammer I am destroyed... thanks for sharing

  • stormtalk On Monday, April 16, 2007, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    haha. neat.

  • Mari On Sunday, February 4, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    i like gasping

  • Mari On Sunday, February 4, 2007, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    i like the gasping breaths part

  • swing_the_hammer On Friday, August 25, 2006, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    this was really cool. i totally dig it. L

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, August 24, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I think this screams with energy and a force within you. Great job describing such rage! ;) I'm partial to your softer pieces, but variety is always a good thing! Julia~

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Pretty cool. Felt like I was at the show. Great work.

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    This was just incredible it gave me chills*nods* Dang I got goosebumps from reading this, the glorious images*sighs* Just magnificent.

  • A former member wrote: Either I'm a dork, or tired from work... or this is just f-in sad.

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