What can i do?

By vaultgrl

Years of loneliness
And hollow feelings
Pent up in side.

Hurting you,
How can I guiltlessly survive?

To be your friend,
That’s all I wanted.
To be there for you,
But I faulted.

Your pain I have increased.
Your hurt I haven’t seen.
Your feelings I’ve been blind to.

Now what can I do?





I'm sorry.

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© 2006 vaultgrl
Published on Thursday, May 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Eric On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    I know how this feels... Great write.

  • Adam On Sunday, May 28, 2006, Adam (241)By person wrote:

    "To be there for you, But I faulted.” No you did not I had to learn for myself and I have. Also know that I will always accept you for you, I don’t need some one else or even for you to feel the way I wished Scholar

  • Adam On Sunday, May 28, 2006, Adam (241)By person wrote:

    . I want you to be the best friend I need, as you have done up until now when ever I gave you that chance. Thank you! Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Friday, May 26, 2006, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...well, I think you already figured out some of it...it'll get better; you already know what you need to know... Scholar

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    Crista your the greatest creature in humanity and I love you, your just beautiful. This made me hurt in so many places and I just wanted to sway you into my arms and hold ya

  • vaultgrl On Friday, May 26, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....thank you so much Tara....*feels unworthy*....

  • Adam On Sunday, May 28, 2006, Adam (241)By person wrote:

    Your worthy of so much. I'm sorry for dumping every thing on you. Thanks for still being there for me when I was a compleate ass!!! That ment more to me then if you felt for me, the way I do for you. Scholar

  • Cattarax On Thursday, May 25, 2006, Cattarax (211)By person wrote:

    .... Crista ... I dont even need to ask ... he will get over it in due time ... and you didnt hurt him as much as he has hurt himself .. IT ISNT ONLY YOU

  • vaultgrl On Friday, May 26, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....I hope your right Tara....thank you...

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