Rames of Inspiration
By Spiritus_Frumenti
[ Ruins of a whisper
Carcasses of thoughts
Existing in abandon
Surrendered as life often does ]
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I have felt you watching,
Hiding your tear-streaming face behind the clouds
Inducing, infinitely,
Such tragedy of being
As your mournful soul now imparters
I have known desire,
Passions that devour
Emotions rivaling the brightest burning star
Yet with desolation imcumbent
Time will consume it
Soon belonging only to the past
I have dreamt of love dissapearing slowly,
Diminishing within each atom
Replacing matter with gloom
Infusing the air with the taste of tears
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Brokenheartedness
I have always wanted my life to be beautifully unfortunate
To live for everything that is dying
Touched deeply by the comfort of emptiness and silence
Where truths tenderly lie
Upon the bitterness that is forever...
Comments on "Rames of Inspiration"
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
through and through this punches a full.powerpacked.blow , but the last part...fully struck a chord within-so incredibly resonate.
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
what is it in "us" that has more comfort with all that is fed with despair......? your prose has eloquently given shelter to some of what i cannot describe about myself...........thank you and well done..............urban
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
*smiles* so good to see your words sting once more. The last stanza a true magnificence, honesty extolled in the most eloquent of ways...
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A former member wrote:
mmm...that last whisper.voice closing.. .such beauty in this breaking sentiment; seems i always get consumed in your clarity....truthful/gentle write
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A former member wrote:
"I have always wanted my life to be beautifully unfortunate To live for everything that is dying"- this is woven with such silent beauty, pale and wispy. this touched me in a lovely way. absolutely wonderful.