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Void
By veingo
I must escape, from this place
far from nowhere.
Someone, make me feel again.
Or fill me in.
For I am the void that
surrounds myself.
What longing!
Such yearning!
A want without boundary,
that cascades, never ending.
Give me something other than vacuum.
Even pain would be better than this
anti-existance, that still somehow,
can't devour my essence.
Something, give me someone.
Someone, give me something.
Anything, give me anything!
What could be worse than stark absence,
where there is not even an echo
to keep me company?
Tell me!
Is anyone there?
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© 2006 veingo
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A former member wrote:
sometimes people trap themselves in an abyss they created for themselves.. you captured this nicely, a lonely atmosphere
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written bro... I can feel your pain in this one. We all have been there. Thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
man can't explain the conection. so good. been there felt that .....still do
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A former member wrote:
A perfectly descriptive depiction of loneliness..masterful in every meaning of the word.-HK
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A former member wrote:
Man I'm sorry I'm kinnda late but I haven't kept up with reading my favs work anymore... Great write and I agree with every one else..... I think theres times we all felt like this...... I know I have
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
may peace answer your call .....your prose is profound in all aspects of your solemn quandry..............well done..............urban
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On Wednesday, January 25, 2006, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Awww. I hate that I'm never on to read you anymore. You're lovely, just know. I'm here, rarely...but I'm here. =) -Courtney
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I feel every ounce of this and then some! Simply heartwrenching & just f*ckin brilliant! Wow.... Julia~
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On Sunday, January 22, 2006, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
sadly...no not in this world of misconceptions...but, one can still dream.
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A former member wrote:
the freedom of such pain somehow leaves us out in the open and almost stranded in the void of ourselves.. I am still here as well. well written as always ~A~
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On Friday, January 20, 2006, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Such a Powerful Ending.
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On Wednesday, January 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Awww I loved it so painful and full of emontion*hugs*
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A former member wrote:
here, have a beer. Sorry, couldn't resist :) The remarkable isolation you express so vividly and powerfully seems to arise from the depths of your being..."not even an echoe"..excellent write! (still, I recommend beer)
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
I'm already on it buddy.
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A former member wrote:
*frowns*
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
Hey, I BURNED my tounge!
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A former member wrote:
haven't you ever heard of fruit juice? or water?! and the tongue burning is your own fault. hmph.
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On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, veingo
(533) wrote:
You make a good point. *ponders*
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A former member wrote:
I'm here, too, V...and I agree with glass, I miss your words as well. This is wonderfully portrayed, even if it seems to bug the hell out of you. I've felt like this before...I hope things get better soon. *Evangel*
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A former member wrote:
i'm here, love. this is beautiful. i miss your words when you don't post for a while.."Even pain would be better than this anti-existance, that still somehow, can't devour my essence." you amaze me. *hugs*
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