The Passage of the Sun

By Crimson Shade

As the spring breeze wakes me to the glory I do behold,
And the robin’s song puts the shadows to flight,
The sun takes its first steps on a well-worn road,
Stirring life, once again into existence.

And now the sun bathes in its own omniscience,
As the butterflies flutter and the flowers do unfurl,
The pallid light reveals our true intentions,
As life endures the scars of survival.

And now the failing light comes to bear,
As the sun struggles with its daily death throws,
The robin’s song is now of silence as the shadows do creep,
The sky sheds crimson tears as life begins its slumber anew.

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© 2006 Crimson Shade
Published on Sunday, January 8, 2006.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Sunday, February 19, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Great piece! I like your imagery for the sunrise "The sun takes its first steps on a well-worn road" - very creative. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Wolk On Saturday, February 11, 2006, Wolk (54)By person wrote:

    Crimson tears. Great one

  • A former member wrote: the imagery in this was absolutely lovely..the approach it took, flowing and peaceful.

  • A former member wrote: This is beautiful. You have certain flow and feeling in your writting that i cant get enough of. Beautiful write...

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 12, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Dang... I had to read this again today! It is just so beautiful. I think I may just read it every day! *smiles* Awesome piece. Julia~

  • TaintedButterfly On Monday, January 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    You always amaze me with your writing. This paints such a picture of the sun setting I didn't want night to come!

  • Mistress Shadow On Monday, January 9, 2006, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    Well thought through and very refreshing! Thank you! ~T

  • LordBrosnian On Sunday, January 8, 2006, LordBrosnian (44)By person wrote:

    Very well written...I appreciatiate some antimodernistic writing...It's the REAL stuff...very refreshing

  • A former member wrote: The succession of your stanzas fit so perfectly with the risings and settings of the sun. Your imagery is as realistic as a painting. Beautiful write. *Evangel*

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