I say nothing (Really this time)

By veingo

Peaple pride themselves, on how well
they play the game.

I'll stab your back, you stab mine.

( Hey they would do the same to me, right? )
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.
.
And I say nothing.


Whispers sear the flesh on my back,
and run goosebumps up my arms.

( As if I can't here them from behind me )
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.
.
.
And I say nothing.


The blame on the floor is swept
in my direction.
By anyone, and everyone who can get
their hands on a broom.

( I'll cough up the dust for days )
.
.
.
.
And I say nothing.


Cars dart in & out, and cut in front
of my older, slower, less-expensive vehicle.

( Half of them give me the finger )
.
.
.
.
And I say nothing.


I collapse on the couch, wanting
to cry, or scream, or strangle someone.

( If only I could afford the time )
.
.
.
.
And I say nothing.


My daughter, crawls onto my lap.
She looks into my eyes, and asks
" what's wrong daddy?"

( I feel a smile welling inside me )
.
.
.
.
and I say,
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.
.
nothing.




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© 2005 veingo
Published on Monday, November 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: People spend most of their lives seeking redemption or justification in a lover, I've found that of everything I've been through in life, the only people who have ever had the power to do either have been my daughters and my family.

  • A former member wrote: you left me speachless really i say nothing more

  • Dysphoria On Sunday, October 7, 2007, Dysphoria (88)By person wrote:

    It's amazing the effect children can have on people, they can turn a bad day into the best sometimes..This brought a smile to my face :]

  • Sin On Saturday, July 29, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this left me feeling warm and with a smile dancing on my lips...children are so often our saviors, our worlds cradled in their tiny hands, and they never even know it..beautiful ~kristy

  • missanthropic On Saturday, January 28, 2006, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful.

  • DoctorAsh On Saturday, January 28, 2006, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Wow man - very impressive, it sometimes seems like the little things that drive us mad, also find a way to take us back to our original disc of sanity, where we find ourselves again, but with a little more wisdom. A truely poetic write my friend. Daniel

  • A former member wrote: I have a sone and a daughter,and isn't it awesome how looking into the eyes of your child or hearing their voice can erase away the worse of any day?*warm smiles* very nice.~A~

  • Army Barbie On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    Awww, you've outdone yourself. I thought it was lovely how you included your daughter. I'm sure she is lucky to have you as a dad. If I'm not mistaken, don't you have more than one? Just curious. This was lovely, doll.

  • Err0r On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    This was wonderful, also as I read through comments I would like to see pictures of your kiddies too. :)

  • A former member wrote: children see what we refuse to. .. . if only we could all keep our eyes like that. .. bless you all~

  • A former member wrote: so not what i expected in this. . .and so much of exactly what i needed; brings tears to my clinging soul. . . beauty and rightness in the small, precious things, eh?

  • veingo On Monday, November 21, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Yes, exactly. Thanks ~Ness~. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: ....woah....that's....that's just about all I can force my fingers to type right about now....this was so very gently stated, and yet enhued with so many emotions...I just...wow...just wow. *Evangel*

  • A former member wrote: this was beautifully heartbreaking..the part about your daughter touched me and i know that it's not truly nothing to you. this was a lovely leap into your thoughts and mind. and i didn't know you had a daughter. =)

  • veingo On Monday, November 21, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I have 1 daughter, and 2 sons. They're the best kids ever.

  • A former member wrote: put up pictures!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • A former member wrote: also, i liked the repition of the word nothing..it softly forced a gentle imprint on my mind, so that by the time i had finished reading, i felt a sadness mixed with knowledge.


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