Soals At Zero

By veingo

Not particulary evil.



Yet, not inclined to good.



They are lukewarm.



They are the haze of grey.



They are those who exist, with nothing to offer.



They are soals at zero.

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© 2005 veingo
Published on Monday, November 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LiP Stiches On Thursday, November 17, 2005, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    sweeet!.....i like short poems with bite!

  • Philla On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    OoO Such a angry and somewhat bitter write. I love it. -*Philla*-

  • Err0r On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    Always a lovely way with your words, you- yourself have so much to offer just in a few coupled words. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: brief and wonderfully written..the word choices were each effectively executed and placed beautifully..your words are always a picture that i find myself getting lost in with my eyes.

  • A former member wrote: i had to come back to this, i often do. "at zero"- such a clever twist of words and an imaginative way of placing them. you amaze me.

  • urbanhumility On Monday, November 14, 2005, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    your absence and selection of words is strong here..................so very well done............urban

  • AniDayz On Monday, November 14, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    :point:taken...powerfully.executed piece.


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