the hell you've created for us

By Darkest_Addiction

im drunk but not from liquor
for love is all the quicker

im hurt but not from wounds
but from the way i feel for you

im dead but not from death
but the heart ripped from my chest

im haunting after death
to tourture you to death

to join me in this hell
that you've created for us

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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Sunday, November 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: awsome. just awsome. quick and strait to the point. beautifly done.

  • coly On Sunday, November 13, 2005, coly (54)By person wrote:

    thats fucken an aswome way of putting that

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