voice

By Eric

my voice is gone.

you've forgotten me.

my voice is gone.

why?

you've let me go.

my voice is gone.

please

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© 2005 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Tuesday, October 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Friday, August 12, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I agree... Lovely!!! Scholar

  • thelostmessenger On Monday, May 14, 2007, thelostmessenger (110)By person wrote:

    so simple... yet so able to speak. i like it. *messenger

  • just breath On Saturday, March 31, 2007, just breath (39)By person wrote:

    an intresting ponder

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 5, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    It's kinda like the sun if it ever lost it's light! I loved this. Awesome piece.

  • Army Barbie On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    Short...and still powerful.

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    short, yet oh so sweet. i liked this one. ~gothic~

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    i relate to this, the entirety, and the structure...the kiss of void...ohhh the tumultuos waves of silence...though...

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, October 25, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ...white:absence [of all colours].black:mergence [of all colours.] ...there's colours...bleeding silence transcending upon vocal structure in rhythm of one heart...silence speaks loudly, as does perceptive recognition...

  • A former member wrote: open my box and release me -

  • A former member wrote: i really like this thought train

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