A dream I had

By veingo

Where did all the bones come from?


Where have all the peaple gone?


Is all I see upon my head?



I hear my angel calling.


She warns me the sky is falling.


It's like the rain, but it's warm, and red.

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© 2005 veingo
Published on Saturday, October 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and
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  • italianbella On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    short but beautiful nonetheless:)

  • A former member wrote: unusual, a dream so close to real. ~Silver~

  • A former member wrote: this felt like my death... of a warmaprylrain....the last line hit me strangely ...almost eerie. ~RAIN~

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, January 26, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    That is one vivid lucid dream! Loved it... Julia~

  • A former member wrote: mockingly beautiful. i like it much.

  • Err0r On Wednesday, October 26, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    Wow. This was amazing. Each word truly felt like it belonged. I am dumbfounded on what else I could possibly say to express how much I truly enjoyed this write. :)

  • A former member wrote: Nice work Viengo... luv the works that so so much in so few words..

  • A former member wrote: cool

  • Philla On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    short and sweet. Wonderful. -*Philla*-


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