speechless
By doll on the rag
you carve images of angels
into my skull
where no god has ever tread
and you fill the void
with something holy
and wholly beautiful
you,
who breathes in common air
and exhales the dust of stars,
whose tongue is thick
with the infinite
my strange and awkward butterfly
that tastes of crushed wings
so foolish to think i could keep you
trapped in the cage of my fingers!
no palms fair enough
to persuade you of your freedom
what universe breeds within you
to create worlds like heartbeats:
an act of existance
rather than will
to have touched the limitless,
embraced that which cannot be held
is
here,
take my hands
i cannot write anymore.
----
written for
LostInDespair,
because
i love him fiercely
and he steals my words.
Comments on "speechless"
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A former member wrote:
I don't know whats more beautiful this or you singing to me on the phone. I miss every part of you. Me
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A former member wrote:
You made me cry sweet... you leave me speechless.
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
i should have had the last bit up there a while ago... everyone should know why i feel how i do. *love*
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A former member wrote:
I wanted so desperately to keep this one to myself, but I just couldn't do it...the thought did make me smile a little inside though = )
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A former member wrote:
you make my hands feel heavy... and useless.. . left in your words.. . such precision of your craft.. .~ness
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, not an addict
(45) wrote:
i'm glad you posted this one... it is too beautiful to be kept hidden.
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
If I have your hands would I have your wonderful talent? Great write.
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On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
"my strange and awkward butterfly that tastes of crushed wings" beautiful. the whole piece felt like a conversation in the wind. perfectly expressed and gentle. lovely. -Glass