She's Only Pretty When She Cries

By CrestfallenTears

She's only pretty when she cries,
when she finds out all of his lies.
She's only pretty when her heart bleeds,
from the bullshit that he feeds.
When he cheats and he lies,
She's only pretty when her heart dies.
When she sheads tears blue as can be,
She's only pretty when he leaves.
She sits alone to cry, her dying heart he denies.
Because she's only pretty when she cries.


yes, it is quite short, but it's also really personal, so I would have to say this is one of my favorites.

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Copyright 2005 CrestfallenTears
Published on Monday, September 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    This is tragicly, beautiful. ^V^

  • GothicBlack On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    Short but oh so sweat. Almost disturbing... yet still beautiful. ~gothic~

  • A former member wrote: That's...saddeningly beautiful, if that works. A poem shouldn't be judged on it's length, unless it's something like two letters. Nice work.

  • Crysa On Sunday, October 2, 2005, Crysa (33)By person wrote:

    "She's only pretty when her heart bleeds" this line brings so many different images to mind. :)

  • A former member wrote: I always heard "Don't cry, you're to pretty to cry" but, I can relate to this piece so well...May be short but it's beautiful!

  • Dei On Monday, September 26, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    I dont thinmk im pretty when i cry... but thank god someone is

  • A former member wrote: i like this one, i can really relate to the girl... awesome write~ DyInG

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