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She's Only Pretty When She Cries
By CrestfallenTears
She's only pretty when she cries,
when she finds out all of his lies.
She's only pretty when her heart bleeds,
from the bullshit that he feeds.
When he cheats and he lies,
She's only pretty when her heart dies.
When she sheads tears blue as can be,
She's only pretty when he leaves.
She sits alone to cry, her dying heart he denies.
Because she's only pretty when she cries.
yes, it is quite short, but it's also really personal, so I would have
to say this is one of my favorites.
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Copyright 2005 CrestfallenTears
Comments on "She's Only Pretty When She Cries"
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo
(533)
wrote:
This is tragicly, beautiful. ^V^
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
Short but oh so sweat. Almost disturbing... yet still beautiful. ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
That's...saddeningly beautiful, if that works. A poem shouldn't be judged on it's length, unless it's something like two letters. Nice work.
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On Sunday, October 2, 2005, Crysa
(33) wrote:
"She's only pretty when her heart bleeds" this line brings so many different images to mind. :)
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A former member wrote:
I always heard "Don't cry, you're to pretty to cry" but, I can relate to this piece so well...May be short but it's beautiful!
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
I dont thinmk im pretty when i cry... but thank god someone is
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A former member wrote:
i like this one, i can really relate to the girl... awesome write~ DyInG
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