Sunset by firelight

By wandering druid

This hollow song
On the edge of a night
Lacking voices passed on
Like the waning light

Teardrops like crystal
Shatter on the stone
And still I remain
alone

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Copyright 2005 onelastbreath
Published on Sunday, September 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • ApathysKiss On Monday, September 5, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    thank goodness for email when faves post new works or i would have missed this...in few words you create such a glacial empty sorrow...i felt the silence and chill of solitude...

  • ApathysKiss On Monday, September 5, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    solemn to the flickering title...any more adjectives would ruin this...~michelle~

  • A former member wrote: nice imagery in this one. good work. ....-samone

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