SINNER

By xserratedsoulx



Mock Piety, False Prayers,

~You’ll Never Get it right~

Striving to Sacrifice yet

Starved for Security, You

Refuse to Acknowledge Your

Doubts. Instead

You Brutalize the Weak Because

Cruelty is the best

Form of Distraction.



But for all your Shrieking,

For all your Impossible Demands,

For all your Violence,

YOU HAVE FAILED.

You have taught me NOTHING for

I have been Aware of my Faults

All Along. And

Hurling me into a

Pit of Darkness makes your

Pitiful Mountain

No Closer

To the Sun.

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Copyright 2005 xserratedsoulx
Published on Wednesday, August 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I must say that your sentiment is shared. So many are cowardly in the shadows of themselves, they feel the need to place others beneath them, though true rightousness exists within a self aware state of humility. Excellent.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    "Cruelty is the best Form of Distraction".. so true, i love the ending.. this reminds me of my father actually, and my relationship with him.. I like the deep thoughts that dance around in this, lovely piece darling.

  • A former member wrote: Good concept, i like it, i like it alot.

  • blue On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    True, religion falls short of it's righteousness.. good job. ~b

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