SINNER
By xserratedsoulx
Mock Piety, False Prayers,
~You’ll Never Get it right~
Striving to Sacrifice yet
Starved for Security, You
Refuse to Acknowledge Your
Doubts. Instead
You Brutalize the Weak Because
Cruelty is the best
Form of Distraction.
But for all your Shrieking,
For all your Impossible Demands,
For all your Violence,
YOU HAVE FAILED.
You have taught me NOTHING for
I have been Aware of my Faults
All Along. And
Hurling me into a
Pit of Darkness makes your
Pitiful Mountain
No Closer
To the Sun.
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Copyright 2005 xserratedsoulx
Published on Wednesday, August 3, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "SINNER"
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A former member wrote:
I must say that your sentiment is shared. So many are cowardly in the shadows of themselves, they feel the need to place others beneath them, though true rightousness exists within a self aware state of humility. Excellent.
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On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
"Cruelty is the best Form of Distraction".. so true, i love the ending.. this reminds me of my father actually, and my relationship with him.. I like the deep thoughts that dance around in this, lovely piece darling.
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A former member wrote:
Good concept, i like it, i like it alot.
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
True, religion falls short of it's righteousness.. good job. ~b