I’ll clean your wounds tonight
By Armor for your life
I’ve seen the flowers fight to touch the sun.
Much like Icarus
But with a better outcome.
I’ve seen the stars shoot across the sky
In search of a better position
In the landscape of night.
Much like me
And my place in your life.
But I’ve never seen
An angel struggle so hard to leave heaven
For a chance to be on earth
A place known for the ache it inflicts
On the already burdened hearts of man.
You’re hurt,
I can hear it in your voice
And I noticed it in your face.
Yet,
You still stay here
In this less than stellar place,
When there is so much more waiting for you.
Darling,
For all the hurt you’ve gone through…
I’ll clean your wounds tonight.
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© 2006 Armor for your life
Comments on "I’ll clean your wounds tonight"
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On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
i just fav-ed it. because i love it.
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On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
i love it. especially the very first line. stunning.
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A former member wrote:
God damn I love everything that you've written.
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On Friday, December 29, 2006, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
ditto to k_love
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Touching and beautiful to take care of someone. Lovely write. I love the reference to Icarus it fitting nicely, wonderful and perfectly flowing write.
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A former member wrote:
"But I've never seen an angel struggle so hard to leave heaven..." Oh wow...to give up the the beauty of acceptance for something that might lead to pain and rejection in the end...this is excellent, the imagery flittering across my eyelids. ~*Beth*~
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Carnapharnelia
(14) wrote:
"But I’ve never seen/ An angel struggle so hard to leave heaven/For a chance to be on earth" Wonderful.
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
It is a nice sentiment..but I am a pervert.. :P :P :P :P....had to tickle my brain...(cause I'm really a cocker spaniel)
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Arianna
(105) wrote:
gorgeous.... ~A
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On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
such a tender moment in these words...absolutely beautiful.