Forever
By no one at all
have you ever met someone
and had something inside you
whisper softly
"forever"
?
i did when i met you
and as our eyes met
i felt it in your stare
"forever"
as we talked for hours
every night
the voice got louder
"forever"
and every new thing
i learn about me
makes it clearer,
"forever"
i feel silly knowing that i
barely
know you
but i know
this is
"forever"
and everytime you laugh
it makes me want to smile
forever
everytime i notice
how perfectly alike we are
it makes me want to tell you
"forever"
but i don't want to be presumptuous
(i don't want to be wrong)
i don't want to scare you
(i don't want you gone)
i know i have
forever
with you
to make declarations, like
"forever"
and i know your heart says
"forever" too
and its beautiful
the way we just fell together
like an accidental puzzle
and its amazing
that automatic connection
we had with eachother
the voices in my heart are getting
louder
and now they are screaming at me
"forever"
and i'm so excited
i'm so nervous
i'm so thrilled
i can't wait
to be in your arms
and whisper softly into the night air
"forever"
Comments on "Forever"
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A former member wrote:
oh wow..... this is what I am feeling now.... and how you've put what's in my heart into words... awesome.....
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A former member wrote:
Sweetly written.
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A former member wrote:
well i havent found forever but i'm glad you have..this was a nice way of expreesing urself..~Amanda~
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
(114) wrote:
The icing on the cake...Living as one.
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, down-sx-ft
(46) wrote:
I am happy for you. I just wish that everyone can have a positive "forever". Great write
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
I always enjoy reading writes from positive nature. Brings a smile to my face to know you have found forever. This poem is very well done.