This is my Forever...

By Spiritus_Frumenti


This is my forever,
Where the emptiness breathes decayed life
Where the air is filled-
with the bitterness of tears shed through time
Here is where I wander, here I cannot die

This is my forever,
Where God would never appear
Where abandon has traveled beyond His reach
Here is where I ponder, here I cannot plead

This is my forever,
Where memories do not arrive
Where the end consumes the sky
Here is where I lie, here I cannot cry

This is my forever,
Where thoughts burn in the dark
Where souls drown in silent weepings
Where the past weaves itself into dreamworlds,
Illusions that perish as easily as us,
Here is where I am, here I will always be....

Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2005

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Published on Tuesday, June 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ubiquitoussoul On Sunday, April 11, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    Yeah.. constrained in this solitary state.. confinement of misery and emptiness..the star in the night sky fixated.longing to be that shooting comet breaking to the ground..Nice write. I did feel the emotion and brevity of the piece..Thanks.

  • shadowsinthelight On Thursday, June 16, 2005, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    Purgatory, .... have you read 'sentenced to lonliness' by thecitymorgue? S.

  • Solace On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    This is like stagnation, the damnation of nothing changing, no hope, just rote, continuous deplorable moments that lead only to the godhead of the past, which was also tedious...crushing piece...

  • LovelyAssassinx On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    This is an awesome peice, I can really feel the pain within it. If you ever just need a friend, I am always here. :) My info is on my pro. ~Unlucky

  • Sin On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    ok i could go all after school special and tell you never to give up hope and there is always something that comes and saves us when we least expect it..but im not going to do that..

  • Sin On Wednesday, June 15, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    instead im going to tell you im sorry for your pain, but this was lovely in its darkness ~kristy

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