you flee to elsewhere

you
flee
to
elsewhere
silently
without
warning
and
i teLL
MYSELF
I
DON'T
CARE
BECAuse
it
isn't
here.

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Published on Thursday, June 9, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "you flee to elsewhere"

A former member wrote: Moody. Love it
A former member wrote: quick impact poetry..I liked the matter-of-fuctness of it all.
A former member wrote: I like this.
On Tuesday, September 27, 2005, Err0r (358) wrote:

dark, gloomy, almost moody. ...A very sexy write. :D Yes indeed, Sexy is the word for it.
A former member wrote: how is it that you express so much in so few words? This is tear-jerking in the strangest of ways.. Magnificent, dear.
On Thursday, June 23, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

i don't know what it is i do that gets at people so... i am simply putting down the things that cut my heart. if it pains you, i am not sorry.
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Oh. dear. god. How can words be so perfect? Astoundingly put. This jolted my heart.. very nice work.
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

thank you, dear... i doubt muchly this supposed perfection, but if it's touched you, i've done my job mostly right.
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178) wrote:

.. the most perfect thing not to read today. Something I feel today but didn't want to hear. So simple, yet forced the pain to in front of my face..
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178) wrote:

instead of in the background...
On Thursday, June 9, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

sorry to hear you're hurting, dearheart... but glad to know you can face it. don't let it fester.